The blog that was once quiet and calm
Suddenly came to the fore with its ultimate charm
I had a follower to make my day
A sarcastic taunt directed the way...
Slow and steady, the realizations dawned
I knew for sure it was an ultra special bond
Someone unknown was stalking my blog
I knew ahead lay more of a slog...
Witty taunts, downright comments were ruling the roost
This 183 centimeters fellow from Bangalore acted to be a real boost
He was keen to read every word of mine
Without being paid a single penny for sparing his time...
Men are these inert species who aren’t expected to react
But this man by chance knew the trick and the tact
He spoke of beauty through math’s and art
Delighted me, even after him being an engineer at heart...
He’s one heck of a techno geek
And without any doubt a total star trek freak
He writes once in a blue moon
His comments in the day keep me thinking till noon...
As if to comment on the blogs of this LEO....
God had sent this one and only NEO!
Sorry Neo for such a poor piece of literature but I wanted to pen down something like poetry for YOU.....Take Care....hope I’ve left smiles behind..!!!
Tuesday, 27 January 2009
My treasured follower
Posted by Radz at 1/27/2009 11:12:00 pm
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hey dats quite a cool post!! and if m not wrong..neo is usually one of the first ppl to share his views about ur blogs!! way to go...and may u have many more followers!!... ;)
It is an honor, Ma'am.
Neo
Good poetry............
hey nice thoughts.......
thats a really very good n encouragin compliment for Neo...
wish u all the very best for comin blogs n may u be o the the best bollgger wid max numbers of followers........
how so very touching..am in tears.."an ultra special bond with a stalker"?? errr...well..ahem..maybe i am wrong here.but somehow the phrase reeks of self contradiciton..
.. "on the blogs of this LEO ..the one and only NEO".. Amazing rhyme usage there (no pun intended)..just so very perfect..u wanted to write "something" like a poetry na..have u found a name for this "something like a poetry" thingy ...
can i have the honor of suggesting please...how abt POETRO...the POETRO LEO WROTO FORO NEO...sounds terribly awesome na..
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YO way to go LEO.. NEO ANDOLEO err.. i mean NEO and LEO ... the whole piece just blazes with precise executions that its got this almost surreal feel to it (again am stressing the fact that i mean no intentional or unintentional sarcasm)...
hope NEO OUR HERO ALSO WRITESO sumthin in the same LINESO on his BLOGO...then maybe we can have sumthin of a LEO NEO POETRO BLOGO CONTESTO..!!
JEsus Christ!! somebody help me before i fall off my chair laughing!!! now now before the sulking phase(face) sets in....jus some harmless leg pulling k :)...no offence. you know that i dont mean anything rite..
i love words a little too much to actually go about massacring them but this one was just screaming its lungs out "please, somebody please taunt me"!!!...nd getting on people's nerves is just so much fun na :) ...u must know, after all i have been your constant target practice for all the tantrums and pranks! ..
and the sad part is that u cant play the fool with everyone around you..just with people whom u trust enuf not to blow it out of proportion..
anyways cming to your "something" like a poetry..i rarely dwell on the literary aspect of poetry...just give me a feel good rhyming nd i am happy nd this one had truckloads of it!!(smirk)..
i am no sycophant re and i'll b brutally honest here...lets just say i have read better stuff from your end and maybe the comparison is what makes this one a dud...u culd have at least used the guys real name..would have added a sliver of character to it and muted down the written for the sake of writing feel ...
and as to b expected from a radz creation,the subtle yet readily apparent feministic undertones, ..(please please dont use the whole male species as an analogy when talking abt a single dude...). being inert is a state which is totally relative to the situation....
if u happen to see a dog being beaten up would u take up the case with PETA...u probably wont..if someone else does take up the case with PETA will that make him/her a more reactive individual than u are or will it make u an inert individual???
..circumstances and situations dictates the action/reaction of every individual and no one is born into the world either inert or receptive by default....just felt like puttin my thought across..if you have a counter argument i will b more than happy to listen..
i am actually raising this issue after three members of the males speceies, after reading the same, had totally bypassed it..does it make me more responsive or them inert??...probably not....maybe they will react to something else and i mite not...hope you got the idea..i guess rules of life are pretty simple..its just extremely hard to keep it that way..
and finally about the blog.. totally loved it k..the whole lavender and floral aesthetics ...and of course the writing..i am pretty aware of ur writing prowess but some of the stuff were just too gud....godbless nd godspeed (I actually learned this word from u !!.:).. i think from one of the testimonials u had writtn fr someoneo ..take care
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